Revisions

Falls of flower vines veil

The ceiling unobserved

Buried in their growth—

Call these the first revision

Elysian lath walls

The cool concrete floor

A square space softened LC4—

Composed revision two

Her figure blurs the white wash

Whose shadow looks back

For the moment to reveal

The convergence of patterns

She waits sacrificial for the flash

Or else temptation wrapt

Corporeal approach

The steel worn necklace warmed

Her foot braces the corner

Plain moulding divides her

She uses memory to loose

Her elevated legs

And the balanced leather glove

That is revision three