Krakatoa

Image

was there, was not
filling the top
a bottomless pit

time

a weightless pocket
the physical sense
of invisible

pressure

a uniform touch
smothering taste
sight, smell

sound

this one took
the others
by

force

This entry was posted on April 7, 2013 by anonymous. It was filed under Poetry .

Miriam E.

very powerful, love it!

April 7, 2013 at 10:20 pm

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- anonymous
  
  Thank you, Miriam.
  
  April 11, 2013 at 2:58 am
  
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Katie

Beautiful use of the sparcity of language. Very nice!

April 14, 2013 at 6:25 am

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- anonymous
  
  Thank you, Katie.
  
  April 14, 2013 at 8:08 pm
  
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Katie

Reblogged this on Words in Motion..

April 14, 2013 at 6:26 am

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